[proofplan]
Fix a threshold $t>0$. The simultaneous deviation event is exactly the union of the individual deviation events because the maximum over the finite index set exceeds $t$ precisely when at least one coordinate exceeds $t$. Since probability measures are finitely subadditive, the probability of this union is bounded by the sum of the individual probabilities. The assumed one-dimensional tail bounds then give the desired estimate.
[/proofplan]
[step:Rewrite the simultaneous deviation event as a finite union]
Fix $t>0$. For each $j\in J$, define the event $A_j\in\mathcal F$ by
\begin{align*}
A_j:=\{\omega\in\Omega: |Y_j(\omega)|\ge t\}.
\end{align*}
The measurability of $A_j$ follows because $Y_j$ is a real-valued [random variable](/page/Random%20Variable) and $(-\infty,-t]\cup[t,\infty)\in\mathcal B(\mathbb R)$, with
\begin{align*}
A_j=Y_j^{-1}\bigl((-\infty,-t]\cup[t,\infty)\bigr).
\end{align*}
Define the simultaneous deviation event $A\in\mathcal F$ by
\begin{align*}
A:=\left\{\omega\in\Omega: \max_{j\in J}|Y_j(\omega)|\ge t\right\}.
\end{align*}
Since $J$ is finite and nonempty, for every $\omega\in\Omega$,
\begin{align*}
\max_{j\in J}|Y_j(\omega)|\ge t
\end{align*}
holds if and only if there exists $j\in J$ such that $|Y_j(\omega)|\ge t$. Hence
\begin{align*}
A=\bigcup_{j\in J}A_j.
\end{align*}
[guided]
Fix a threshold $t>0$. We want to compare the event that at least one of the random variables has a large absolute value with the individual large-deviation events. For each $j\in J$, define
\begin{align*}
A_j:=\{\omega\in\Omega: |Y_j(\omega)|\ge t\}.
\end{align*}
This is an event in $\mathcal F$: indeed, since $Y_j:(\Omega,\mathcal F)\to(\mathbb R,\mathcal B(\mathbb R))$ is measurable and $(-\infty,-t]\cup[t,\infty)$ is a Borel subset of $\mathbb R$, we have
\begin{align*}
A_j=Y_j^{-1}\bigl((-\infty,-t]\cup[t,\infty)\bigr)\in\mathcal F.
\end{align*}
Now define
\begin{align*}
A:=\left\{\omega\in\Omega: \max_{j\in J}|Y_j(\omega)|\ge t\right\}.
\end{align*}
Because $J$ is finite and nonempty, the maximum $\max_{j\in J}|Y_j(\omega)|$ is well-defined for every $\omega\in\Omega$. For a fixed outcome $\omega\in\Omega$, the inequality
\begin{align*}
\max_{j\in J}|Y_j(\omega)|\ge t
\end{align*}
means exactly that at least one of the finitely many numbers $|Y_j(\omega)|$ is at least $t$. Therefore $\omega\in A$ if and only if $\omega\in A_j$ for some $j\in J$. This proves the identity
\begin{align*}
A=\bigcup_{j\in J}A_j.
\end{align*}
[/guided]
[/step]
[step:Apply finite subadditivity and insert the tail bounds]
Using the identity from the previous step and finite subadditivity of the probability measure $\mathbb P$,
\begin{align*}
\mathbb P(A)
=\mathbb P\left(\bigcup_{j\in J}A_j\right)
\le \sum_{j\in J}\mathbb P(A_j).
\end{align*}
By the hypothesis applied to each $j\in J$ at the fixed threshold $t>0$,
\begin{align*}
\mathbb P(A_j)
=\mathbb P(\{\omega\in\Omega: |Y_j(\omega)|\ge t\})
\le p_j(t).
\end{align*}
Substituting these bounds into the finite subadditivity estimate gives
\begin{align*}
\mathbb P\left(\left\{\omega\in\Omega: \max_{j\in J}|Y_j(\omega)|\ge t\right\}\right)
=\mathbb P(A)
\le \sum_{j\in J}p_j(t).
\end{align*}
Since $t>0$ was arbitrary, the desired inequality holds for every $t>0$. No independence assumption is used.
[/step]