[guided]Fix one outcome $\omega \in E$. From this point to the end of the step, the argument is deterministic linear algebra. Define the displacement vector $h \in \mathbb{R}^p$ by
\begin{align*}
h := \mu-\bar X(\omega).
\end{align*}
Since $\omega \in E$, the matrix $S(\omega)$ is positive definite, so $S(\omega)^{-1}$ exists and is positive definite. Define
\begin{align*}
(\cdot,\cdot)_{S(\omega)} : \mathbb{R}^p \times \mathbb{R}^p &\to \mathbb{R} \\
(u,v) &\mapsto u^\top S(\omega)^{-1}v .
\end{align*}
This is an inner product because $S(\omega)^{-1}$ is symmetric positive definite.
We need to bound $a^\top h$, where $a \in \mathbb{R}^p$ is arbitrary. The right inner product is the one induced by $S(\omega)^{-1}$ because the Hotelling ellipsoid controls $h^\top S(\omega)^{-1}h$. For completeness, we prove the Cauchy-Schwarz estimate in this inner product. For $u,v \in \mathbb{R}^p$ and $t \in \mathbb{R}$,
\begin{align*}
0
&\le (u-tv,u-tv)_{S(\omega)} \\
&= (u,u)_{S(\omega)} -2t(u,v)_{S(\omega)} + t^2(v,v)_{S(\omega)}.
\end{align*}
If $v \ne 0$, this quadratic polynomial in $t$ is non-negative for every real $t$, so its discriminant is non-positive. Hence
\begin{align*}
4(u,v)_{S(\omega)}^2
-
4(u,u)_{S(\omega)}(v,v)_{S(\omega)}
\le 0,
\end{align*}
which gives
\begin{align*}
|(u,v)_{S(\omega)}|^2
\le
(u,u)_{S(\omega)}(v,v)_{S(\omega)}.
\end{align*}
If $v=0$, the same inequality holds because both sides are zero.
Now take an arbitrary $a \in \mathbb{R}^p$. The expression $a^\top h$ can be rewritten as an inner product with first entry $h$:
\begin{align*}
a^\top h
&= h^\top a \\
&= h^\top S(\omega)^{-1}S(\omega)a \\
&= (h,S(\omega)a)_{S(\omega)}.
\end{align*}
Applying the just-proved Cauchy-Schwarz estimate with $u=h$ and $v=S(\omega)a$ gives
\begin{align*}
|a^\top h|^2
&\le
(h,h)_{S(\omega)}(S(\omega)a,S(\omega)a)_{S(\omega)} \\
&=
h^\top S(\omega)^{-1}h \, a^\top S(\omega)S(\omega)^{-1}S(\omega)a \\
&=
h^\top S(\omega)^{-1}h \, a^\top S(\omega)a.
\end{align*}
Because $\omega \in E$, the Hotelling inequality gives
\begin{align*}
n h^\top S(\omega)^{-1}h \le c_\alpha,
\end{align*}
and hence
\begin{align*}
h^\top S(\omega)^{-1}h \le \frac{c_\alpha}{n}.
\end{align*}
Substituting this into the previous estimate yields
\begin{align*}
|a^\top(\mu-\bar X(\omega))|
\le
\sqrt{\frac{c_\alpha}{n}\,a^\top S(\omega)a}.
\end{align*}
The direction $a$ was arbitrary, and the outcome $\omega$ was fixed only under the condition $\omega \in E$, so this bound holds for every $a \in \mathbb{R}^p$ on the same event $E$.[/guided]